-americassuiteheart

I read Detonation and I loved it!
          Could you give me tips?

d3dacc0unt12345

@-AmericasSuiteHeart Heyyyyy, I am so so soooo sorry that I am only answering now but if you are still interested, I can give you any tips I have. Truth is, even though I'm still quite proud of this story (first story I published and finished, quite an achievement for me tbh) I definitely got better with time. And even though it may not be the miracle tip you want, it's the one that works best. But also, studying your favorite authors helps a bunch because you pick up things from their style and include it in yours which is how every writer creates their own style. So yeah, if you have any more specific questions, I'd happily respond to them! Have a great night, or day! (and thank you so much for the compliment, 'cause even though it's almost been 3 years, I'm still really happy that this story inspires or is juste enjoyed by others... Thank you !)
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robbstark39

Thanks for the vote and the follow ! It's really kind of you ♡♡♡

robbstark39

@ robbstark39  Non t'inquiète pas 
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d3dacc0unt12345

*Ne te force pas xD
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d3dacc0unt12345

@robbstark39 Haha mais tu ne pouvais pas savoir que j'étais française ! 
            Ne te force pas 
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RiaReese

Well then. Leave you a message I guess. 
          I red you Book (and yes I think you really can call it a book, not just a FF) Detonation and I wanna say I really like it. It's one of the best Stories of this kind I found by now :) So congratulations for this (although I don't like sad ends, haha) 
          
          Moreover your taste in bands an series is literally mine, we could be hidden sisters 'D
          
          Anyway I'm going to read you second book and leave you nice, sweet greetings right here :D
          Have a good day and take care!
          Bye
          

d3dacc0unt12345

@RiaReese Haha, don't worry about typos! I probably make some myself (and more often than I wish I would!)
            
            Thank you! It does mean a lot!
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RiaReese

Yehaaa typos ~ *big *to *me 
            I'm sorry xD
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RiaReese

@Dalleekah You're Welcome :3 It's no bug deal for me so share (positive) thoughts, haha. Actually it's would worse to don't do it. Because it just come out of be before I can stop it :') 
            
            
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your_local_dad_joke

I love all the bands and l shows you watch and listen to and I LOVEEEEE dan and phil that are so CUTEEEE I ship them so hard it hurts and when I found out that MCR broke up I was in physical pain. Now they are mostly what I listen to and every time I listen to WTLBP and Helena I cry

d3dacc0unt12345

Well hi dear multi-fandom friend! 
            I don't ship them myself but, if they happened to be together, who am I to say anything, right? As long as they're happy.
            It did the same to me but, at some point you'll get through and, I'm actually kinda glad they stopped where they did (don't get me wrong, I would have loved to see them live or release a new album) because if they kept doing music maybe the music they gave us would not be as important as it is now that they're gone. (I don't know if I make any sense but anyway)
            Both those songs are the bomb!  ^-^
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