enerlash

gustong gusto ko pag nkkabasa ako ng less effort pra pkiligin ang reader's :) im not a pro to say this pero nakakatuwa n makabasa ka ng mga may sense n kwento . yung unang page plang , mahuhook kna . meron kc iba , masyado ng cliché yung iintroduce mo pa ung character w/ the same attitude of them . minsan nkkairita . no offend a silent reader ako pero pag may ngustuhan ako shineshare at ngvovote nmn ako , yun nga lang . ayoko ng comments :) tnx :)

my litle things way of saying sorry is too look u down to up :)