daaiandereen

Wattpad is not letting me unpublish, so I'm just going to copy everything to Word to edit where it's easiest, and then replace the original with the edited a chapter at a time when I'm done with everything :)

0TheWritingPanda0

Thanx for the criticism and thanx for not sugar coating it, it really helped.
          

daaiandereen

@KirstynR it's still awesome, love an adventure
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0TheWritingPanda0

@KirstynR Yea it does need a lot of work but it's also only a first draft really 
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daaiandereen

@KirstynR  it's a pleasure, you have a really fun story with a badass character, keep writing! :)
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