dabi-blueflames24

With the All Spark gone, we cannot return life to our planet. And fate has yielded its reward: a new world to call home. We live among its people now, hiding in plain sight, but watching over them in secret, waiting, protecting. I have witnessed their capacity for courage, and though we are worlds apart, like us, there's more to them than meets the eye. I am Optimus Prime, and I send this message to any surviving Autobots taking refuge among the stars. We are here. We are waiting.

JaeZInsane

What I’ve Done!
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PowerLegendPrime

Hey bro remember me?

PowerLegendPrime

It's just i passed and remember our project of intergalactic mercenaries 
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PowerLegendPrime

@ PowerLegendPrime  yeah I changed al little My name but the Characters Is the same
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SsjGojirafan9000

Dabi I need some writing advice help.
          
          So like, do or would the humans refer to the Kaiju Girls  as "Kaiju Girls" and do the Kaiju Girls refer to themselves the same way as "Kaiju Girls?", or do the humans and Kaiju Girls just call them/themselves "Kaiju"?

SsjGojirafan9000

@dabi-blueflames24 Ok thanks. Would it make sense if I had the characters refer to them as Kaiju but my narration of the story refer to them as Kaiju Girls? Or should I keep with calling them Kaiju in the narration?
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dabi-blueflames24

Since the kaiju girls are a normal occurrence they mostly just refer to the, as kaiju.
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dabi-blueflames24

With the All Spark gone, we cannot return life to our planet. And fate has yielded its reward: a new world to call home. We live among its people now, hiding in plain sight, but watching over them in secret, waiting, protecting. I have witnessed their capacity for courage, and though we are worlds apart, like us, there's more to them than meets the eye. I am Optimus Prime, and I send this message to any surviving Autobots taking refuge among the stars. We are here. We are waiting.

JaeZInsane

What I’ve Done!
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