dailyrobogirl

@shazrox it's great that you're letting me know! I mean it was my first attempt and I really do welcome feedback since I created it to brush up my English skills. Was it the grammar? I'll re-edit it for sure once I know the cause :) .

itstatiguys

@pyfnxx  can you pliz update MMRM ~my mate raped me ~ good stories but in my opinion mmrm is one of the best
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dailyrobogirl

@shazrox it's great that you're letting me know! I mean it was my first attempt and I really do welcome feedback since I created it to brush up my English skills. Was it the grammar? I'll re-edit it for sure once I know the cause :) .

itstatiguys

@pyfnxx  can you pliz update MMRM ~my mate raped me ~ good stories but in my opinion mmrm is one of the best
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shazrpx95

I don't mean to be rude to you in your book Flight. I'm just kind of saying you need an editor or to read them over a few times for uploading. It was a good story though and I did enjoy it.
          
          If you wanted, you could give me feedback on my story 87th Games

shazrpx95

this is the link http://www.wattpad.com/25861783-87th-games-knot-boy#.Uj1rEz-w8kk
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