Updated Chapter Five of The Exodus! Added some more introductory scene to the beginning. Would anyone mind letting me know if this intro and the little extra bits of information are effective, emotionally? I'd greatly appreciate it. <3
Updated Chapter Five of The Exodus! Added some more introductory scene to the beginning. Would anyone mind letting me know if this intro and the little extra bits of information are effective, emotionally? I'd greatly appreciate it. <3