danaburke87

Hi, guys just giving the readers a little update. I will be posting the 3rd part for oversized either later today or tomorrow. Hope everyone is having a great weekend :) 

Daisyfly

Your story seems like it could be great but only got through the first chapter cause it was very hard to read without quotation marks...not hard per se but it took a lot of figuring out as to who's saying what....hopefully when you edit it, you'll consider putting in some quotation marks but from what I've read so far, your writing seems to be great.