Hey Dani!
Kristy here :) So recently I had entered in 'Reckless' into this book competition thingy, and never thought anything about it before -that I would get in or even excepted for a screening. So any ways you were supposed to send in the type of story it is, the title and chapter you want featured. So I did and they got back to me just today actually. I had picked the chapter called "Street Kings" and they told me some minor errors I should look into before reapplying, but apparently they were excited to get a fanfic.
Not to bore you with the rest of the details, I was wondering if you could look over that chapter for me and spot any spelling mistakes or things I should change -because apparently they said it was a bit to fast pacing for them?
I was going to go over it already but even a writer needs an editor as well. So if you could get back on me with this, that would be awesome :) By the way do you find that chapter went to fast?
~Kristy