Hey there! So I read your story They Died, Then He Came. It's good so far, but I i can be honest I'd say that it is somewhat hard to follow, simply due to the lack of paragraphs. That is just my opinion though. Otherwise, its very interesting.
I absolutely LOVE your profile picture by the way. Where did you get it?
Also, I would love it if you could read my story Midoria's Heart. I think that it is very original, and I hope that you will too! (I see your message below says that you want to read something different. Lol. And quite frankly, I agree. There are way to many clichéd stories about arranged marriages and things like that. I don't understand what the draw is >.<) Anyway, here is the information/description for you:
Title: Midoria's Heart.
Genre: Adventure, Fantasy
Description:
Light... Darkness...
A magical kingdom in the sky called Midoria faces this constant struggle for power. For thousands of years, the power of Light has beat down the darkness, thanks to the great but mysterious power of Midoria's Heart. However, the Dark power is quickly growing and spreading, bringing the threat of death and destruction to the once peaceful kingdom.
After the horrendous murder of her parents, 17 year old Adelle must return to live with her grandparents, the rulers of the kingdom of Midoria. It is there that Adelle discovers a secret room hidden in the castle, which holds clues to the whereabouts of the lost Heart of Midoria, and the Dark power that it once sealed away.
But time is running out, and the seal that binds the Darkness is wearing thin. Adelle must rush to save her kingdom from the coming evil before it is too late, but at the same time, she must make a decision much closer to her own heart. A choice that could cost her everything; one that could change her entire future.
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Please read it and I would love to hear what you think about it! Constructive criticism is allowed too, I want your honest opinion!
Thanks so much!!
