danyeldenee
First story, please tell me what to do to make it better!!!! https://www.wattpad.com/story/107181609
danyeldenee
@hershey1403 could u explain what you don't understand about her??? I'm generally asking to try and make the story clearer, or if I don't want to relevant it just yet, just to make sure I speed it up or just remind myself to cover it.
hershey1403
@danyeldenee its like... I didn't quite understand what the protagonist is like... can't explain it properly though...