daphne_d1999

Hi everyone! Sorry to bother all of you, but would it be too much of me to ask that you check out my two-page one shot, 'Fire and Ice'? I'd love to know what all of you think! Thank you for your time! 

daphne_d1999

Hi everybody! And an early Merry Christmas/ Happy New Year! I don't usually ask for anything, but I would greatly appreciate it if you would check out my one shot: https://www.wattpad.com/story/56761075-fire-and-ice
          Let me know what you think? Give me constructive criticism? Comment? And let me know if you like it, please! I'd really like to to know where my writing stands! Thank you so much!

daphne_d1999

@SofiaIvashkov of course, you were bored, that's how normal people like us rest whe bored and obviously, being a kindred spirit, I read everything you wrote because I understand where you're coming from, but the characters ago Jenna and all kind confused me, though I think I've read that story, and I guessed the vampire academy one because I've read the first two books of the series, and btw, that's awful how the writer can't even control her own character, but the main point to this rant is the question about whether or not O have written a long enough sentence even though its not as long as yours, and I hope you can answer it!