daphne_d1999

Hi everyone! Sorry to bother all of you, but would it be too much of me to ask that you check out my two-page one shot, 'Fire and Ice'? I'd love to know what all of you think! Thank you for your time! 

daphne_d1999

Hi everybody! And an early Merry Christmas/ Happy New Year! I don't usually ask for anything, but I would greatly appreciate it if you would check out my one shot: https://www.wattpad.com/story/56761075-fire-and-ice
          Let me know what you think? Give me constructive criticism? Comment? And let me know if you like it, please! I'd really like to to know where my writing stands! Thank you so much!

SofiaIvashkov

@daphne_d1999 Lool, yes I can answer it because I do get how Richelle doesn't control Rose in the first two or three books but later Rose becomes more mature and stuff, but I hate how mean she was to Adrian becase I was Team Adrian ever since the second book which you have read, so you must have met Adrian and seen how freaking amazing he is and how lovable he is even though I hate the whole drinking and smoking thing because I'm really against those though I hate smoking more but I overlooked that part because hes a sexy beast and hes so damn sweet and I didn't like Dimitri that much and I've met alot of people who don't like Rose because shes all crazy and selfish or something, which I agree with in the frst book because I went crazy when she told Christian that Lissa doesn't like him because I freaking love Christian so damn much and him and Lissa were so cute and she was being a bitch because she was jelly and anyways, I'm trying to continue with the whole long sentence thing, lol c';

daphne_d1999

@SofiaIvashkov of course, you were bored, that's how normal people like us rest whe bored and obviously, being a kindred spirit, I read everything you wrote because I understand where you're coming from, but the characters ago Jenna and all kind confused me, though I think I've read that story, and I guessed the vampire academy one because I've read the first two books of the series, and btw, that's awful how the writer can't even control her own character, but the main point to this rant is the question about whether or not O have written a long enough sentence even though its not as long as yours, and I hope you can answer it!  

SofiaIvashkov

@daphne_d1999
          I want her to play this girl in this book that I love that their turning into a movie but they haven't told us the cast yet because they only bought the movie rights and haven't actually started making the movie but they told us what people could be playing them but might not because they haven't asked them and I can't remember if Dianna was supposed to play Lissa or not but I remember Dimitri as Ben Barnes and I think thats all I remember out of all of them because my memory is stupid and I'm stupid but I'm not as stupid as all those people who thought the world was gonna end yesterday and bought underground houses and guns to kill 'zombies' with because I didn't do that because I'm not a millionaire and all of them were because that stuff cost a few million dollars I think because I'm not sure but atleast I'm not as stupid as them and I'm only stupid because I can't remember who Richelle Mead said could be playing who but I just remembered that Sophia Bush could be Rose so I'm smarter then I was a second ago which is pretty amazing because I just became smart in a second and I'm just trying to make the longest sentence I can right now because at the start I was trying to talk to you but then I thought 'This is a long sentence' and now I'm trying to make the longest sentence possible and I'm aware you probably think I'm crazy but oh well because I'm bored and I just finished my book which was amazing but the end was awful and I hated it and the sequel has this other sIut girl and shes awful and it's in her POV and I'm so pissed because the author wants Leah to take Jennas spot and then Jenna will wake up and have nobody because the stupid thing will steal all her friends and Jenna will be all lost and if Jason chooses Leah over Jenna I'm seriously gonna die because last night I was thinking how awful it would be if I was Jenna and I woke up after five years and the guy I'm full in love with loves some other sIut and now I have nobody.