AngelA

A usual story made better with interesting characters. I love how empowered and independent Audrey is, just all of her character arch is just well written. Good read.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/115532879

I don't usually recommend incomplete stories, however "Fighting for Life" by @KylieAlyssa is one of the best read I've had and it really pulls on your heartstrings.

Another surprise, I found one more story that amaze me and keep me on my wits. "The Insemination" by  @NaturallySilly.  An added must read. (I haven't finish it though )

"The Last Shewolf" is one of the best story here on wattpad, I haven't finish it yet however just the first chapter will get you excited to read more.

“Daddy Unknown”
          A one of a kind story in letting go, claiming what you want, changing what is needed to be change. I like the character arcs; you can see the growth without losing their characteristics. The setting is a little broad, not fully defined except for their apartment, so the setting seems unimportant to the story. The conflicts are not that heavy but still struck a chord, and the resolutions are at par with it. The tone is unconventional romance with a twist of destined lovers. The pacing for me is accurate to how you want everyone to follow a love story that seems to fast yet right. 
          I give this story 3 star out of 5, because it’s good but forgettable.  
          Oh, I would like to commend you on the exceptional cover.

“At First Sight”
          The plot of this story is one of the unique once I’ve read. It has a unconventional yet realistic feel and with a proper tone that has a mixture of genuine emotions with a hint of mystery and a dash of sex. It has the correct pacing where everything falls into place at just the right time, a whirlwind romance but it feels right, unlike other same story that has characters falling too fast for each other. The story has momentum, you know that the conflict is coming but it still feels unexpected, which I like. The setting is well introduced, it is not well detailed but you can still picture it out. The characters arcs are well written, you can see the growth in them. 
          This is a story well recommended, a cliché story in a unique setting with a realistic characters which will leave you rooting for their love story.

“Life Unexpected”
          The story has a cute plot, not amazing, but it is entertaining and captivating. The setting is broad, a little random or not fully anchored, therefore can be interchange with a different place. The tone of the story is a playful with a hint of seriousness, I can feel that you/the author enjoy where the story is going. The pacing is just right, in my opinion you can follow the story with full understanding on where in the story you are. The conflicts are not that difficult and/or heavy, so the resolutions are at par with the problem, uncomplicated and easy. The Character arc is where you shined; their personalities are defined/clear with an evolving arc. 
          All in all a feel good story to just lose yourself in.

“Her Haven”
          First off, I would like to commend you for picking “Her Haven” as the title, it’s a good choice. If I’m being honest, I would not have read it if you titled it “The Mafias Baby” which I just noticed, midway through reading the story, is in the cover. However, I suggest that you remove it there because the truth is that it adds to the mystery of when the character and the reader are clueless of what He was up to. And again, good job on the description; it draws you enough without giving anything away. Now the plot was amazingly written with a unique story line; although, some parts are confusing. The setting was understandable. You have set the tone nicely, with an action, mystery and love in the mix. The pacing is all over the place, the first half of the story I feel is too fast, the middle is dragging and last half is just lacking some key points. The conflicts you presented are ok.  The best part for me of the whole story is the ending, for it is satisfying and yet you crave for more; one of the best for me. The characters arcs are in between ok and good. Lisa’s arc and personality at first is a little weakly written nevertheless the last half is good. For me Vincent’s arc and personality is where you hit the mark, he is well defined/written, he is complex yet simple to picture out. 
          Now I must say; I was planning on not finishing reading this due to very crucial reason. There are a lot, and I mean A LOT of spelling, grammar and punctuation error, that just take you out of the story. And one more thing in my opinion you don’t need to have a full on Italian words then translation if Vincent’s POV, I think it is a little bit unnecessary. I suggest that only conversations that are Italian should be written in Italian, however please put a translation.  I’ve notice that you wrote a whole paragraph in Italian then translate the whole paragraph, but the conversation in Italian doesn’t have any. I just get confuse.

“The District Line”
          The plot was unique when it comes to gay story lines on wattpad, in all three of the District Line stories. The topic that was discussed was deep and handled tastefully. The setting was well introduced and described. The conflict they faced was introduced in a sequential manner that you can feel the conflict brewing and the resolution satisfying. Characters personalities are well defined yet, you can still see their arcs. The pacing was just right that you can follow and understand it without difficulty.

“My Not So One Night Stand”
          I love how the plot progress, it is realistic and uncomplicated, it flows well. The setting of the story is good; it was described in a understandable manner that you can picture it out in your mind. The conflicts the characters faced and how they were resolved are believable. The tone is seductive with a hint of humor. Well pace story line and well developed character arc.