darklordi

Wrote the lyrics for a song about the character Shadow from the franchise Sonic. Ok the instrumental was made with AI but I'm not a musician and I win nothing with it, just doing it for the fun and the pleasure to write and test things. Let me know what you think about it if you're curious. 
          	https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WPTdR9MSc7w

Joseph112348

Zeng flapped lightly down in front of the cave mouth. The Dragon Grotto lay through the tunnel ahead of him, candles lined along the floor casting orange firelight and dancing shadows across the walls. Zeng took a few more reluctant steps forward, feeling as though he were intruding on sacred ground, like he had crossed into a space that wasn’t meant for him. Continuing into the firelit tunnel, the only sound was the slap of his feet against the cold stone floor, the echoes trailing off into the vast stillness. Soon, a faint sound of water trickling reached his ears, growing louder as he continued on. The trickle quickly became the unmistakable roar of a waterfall. Zeng entered a large chamber, where a crystal-clear pool filled most of the space, fed by a tall waterfall cascading down a steep cliff at the back. Mist rose from the waterfall, drifting over the chamber and softening the fading light of the setting sun, which struggled to break through the distant mountains. The cool, damp air was alive with the sound of rushing water, filling the vast cavern. In the center of the chamber, an enormous dragon statue, coiled and covered in moss, loomed over the pool, its presence as imposing as it was ancient.
          On a small island in the middle of the pool sat Shifu. He radiated a serene, calming energy. Though he didn’t move a muscle, Zeng knew Shifu was aware of him.
          
          
          
          
          Now this is the final revision of what ChatGPT provided after a long conversation of what I was looking for to combined the original draft with the tweeked suggested sentences.

Joseph112348

Zeng flapped lightly down in front of the cave mouth. The Dragon Grotto lay through the tunnel in front of him, candles lined the floor casting orange firelight and dancing shadows across the walls and ceiling. Zeng took a few reluctant steps in, he felt like he was violating some hallowed ground. Like he was stepping over some boundary where he wasn't welcome. 
          
          Continuing into the fire lit tunnel, Zeng heard nothing but the slaps of his feet on the stone floor and the echoes that followed. Zeng then heard the faint sound of water trickling somewhere ahead. 
          
          A little further in and the trickle became a loud crash of water pounding and churning. The tunnel opened up into a wide chamber. A circular pool fed by a huge waterfall took up most of the chamber, its water clambering down over the steep cliff that made up the back of this chamber. Zeng could see mist covered mountains in the distance trying to cover the setting sun. An equally large statue of a dragon, coiled and coated in moss, sat looming over the pool. 
          
          Zeng saw Shifu sitting on a small island directly in front of the statue. He radiated a serene, calming energy and though he did not move a muscle, Zeng knew Shifu was aware of him.
          
          This is the original draft that my friend on Discord wrote.
          
          Stinging orange firelight created dancing shadows on the walls of the cave. He took a few more reluctant steps as his feet slapped on the cold stone floor, echoes following shortly. Zeng listened as he heard the drip of water which grew into the noise you could not mistake to be a waterfall. The noise grew louder and louder, until finally he was at a chamber. Inside was a large crystal clear pool, fed by a tall waterfall. The...more
          This is the suugested tweeking for some sentences that didn't make sense in the original draft as this was written by SunsetCloudHunter here on Wattpad
          
          Now this is all I can do for now as I'm almost up to my limit.

Joseph112348

What does that mean. I just wanted to know if you can help me proof read a draft of a scene that was written by a friend on mine on Discord. Then a tweeked sentences draft for some sentences that didn't make sense in the original draft. Also I'm just letting you know that I showed the two things that I just mentioned to you to ChatGPT & it gave me a final revisement. All I'm asking is if you wouldn't mind looking over of what I just mentioned?

darklordi

@Joseph112348 If it's just reading it, i'm okay  but I'll just do that, nothing more.
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Joseph112348

That's good to know cause I was wondering if you can help me with a scene for my King Fu Panda Fanfic as this scene has put me a long Hiatus. & I wanna get this chapter & one more to publish on the date of two years of being published on Wattpad before I renew edit it.
          
          Though FYI A friend of mine on Discord wrote out the scene but there was sentences that didn't make sense. So I ask a friend of mine on here to tweeked those sentences I highlighted & she did. But I didn't know how to combine them so I can keep the original while having the tweeked suggestions in. So I ask ChatGPT to help & it gave me a good revised finalization draft. Then I ask MetaA. I. for help & it gave me a good sentence for the final part of this draft.
          
          So if I gave you everything I just said would you mind taking a look at it & see what you can come up with?

darklordi

@Joseph112348 I'm not really used to do that kind of thing to be honest.
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Joseph112348

Hello there my name's Joseph112348. I don't know if you remember me from messages but I'm also the one that read your Avatar Fanfic & asked you if you were going to write a sequel. Anyway I wanted to ask if you know any: Disney, DreamWorks, & Hasbro content. Also I just looked at your new announce you can draw?

darklordi

@Joseph112348 I'm terrible at drawing so no, I stopped, I just write.
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darklordi

What made me want to become a writer? I think it comes from the fact that since I was little, I have always been a dreamer, a little removed from the real world. Even as a child, I drew little comics on sheets of paper with characters that I had imagined, then as I grew up, I stopped drawing to write stories. I think it was also a way for me to escape from the mockery I suffered at school. I always felt apart, disconnected from the real world, and I don't say that pretentiously but as a fact. I like to escape in my head, to dream and I want to make others travel and dream with my stories. Nothing obliges me to want to make others dream, it's true, but it's my choice. Those who know me well know that I'm not the biggest fan of humans but I know that there are a lot of good people in this world and they are the ones I want to make happy. 
          So one day, I took my courage in both hands and sent my stories to a publishing house and they accepted, and so in 2020 I began my writing career.

darklordi

@Owen31620 Yeah I'm pretty proud of this one too :)
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Owen31620

It was your mummy story and that was epic 
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darklordi

@Owen31620 And besides TITANS, which other stories did you enjoy reading? I'm curious :)
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