caryslh28

Heya! I love your story - Tragic lives of beautiful children. 
          
          I first read it on fanfic net where it was still a Pitch Perfect fanfic. And I'm so happy your deciding to get it published. It's absolutely amazing, probably my most favourite fan fiction, no scratch that, story, I've ever read. And I've read a lot of both fanfic and random books, believe me. XD 
          
          The only problem is, for some reason I can't read it here on Wattpad, it comes up with an error message, saying it's not available to download, considering I use the app. Which is a real shame, cause I desperately want to read it again. XD So I was wondering, its it cause your currently editing, or something similar to that. Or is it my Wattpad? 
          
          Anyway, thanks so much for making this incredible story, it's so haunting yet inspiring, and so, so beautiful. I only hope I can read the published version whilst it's making the headlines, as it truly deserves. XD

KatlynnDewey

@caryslh28 I fell in love with this story on fanfic too! I've read it several times and just went back to read it today when I saw this message instead but I'ma having the same problem you are. :'( it's the first story I found that was able to provoke a reaction from me. I thought it was beautifully​ well written and you can tell that there was a lot of thought put into it. I hope it gets fixed soon so we can read it again, but even if the names and stuff are changed it'll still be Beca and Aubrey in my mind
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AstridChase

It's the names. It feels like you took a random name generator and replaced the names. I mean, Howard? Bobby? And you are still using dialog from the movie, and their personalities are very similar to their original characters, for lack of better word. It's like reading Pitch Perfect fanfiction, but the character all decided to change their names.

darkwriterxx94

@AstridChase thank you for the feedback. I'm currently in the process of revising and editing the entire thing so I'm grateful for you criticism.
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