KuchClan
Hey dark,would you like to help me write because you seem more experienced than I am so if you would want to just message me thx so much
darkzdragon
@coolman2123456 right now my work load is a bit heavy. I read your untitled story and my tip to you is slow things down. In chapter one nick and judy go out to talk and then we are randomly in a fire. You want to set a slow pace so your readers can get all the detail. Once you got the pace set you want to figure out the direction of the story before writing a word. You also should try to set a limit of how much of one thing there is. You dont want too much drama all the time. Those are a few tips for now. Once my work load clears up a bit i might consider helping. Depending on what i have going on. Thank you for the offer -Darkzdragon
