
silly_clownlover
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I love your beetle juice book that's like your old and shit but honestly, it's confusing. Your chapters are too short for me to understand anything that's happening, and there is only little detail. You write what the character say but not their actions. It's very little details of what's going on. You should try to add more detail so readers can understand what's happening, where they are, what their emotions/actions are

darlingIMaQUEEN
Hey love, I wrote that book when I was rlly into the musical ive tired updating it many times but i unfortunately always lose the motivation for it
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