I can't believe I've gone through an adventure where I could laugh & enjoy it so much; get emotional & cry; get horny...
I've really liked that the reader/girl acts like that (shy, embarrassed & so afraid) infront of him when he tried to ..like get very close to her naked body. Bc I've never read a girl acting actively like that and trying to push him seriously away before.
Also all the descriptions of him in the beginning...idk but I could imagine them so well in made my heart feel so weird. I mean some scenes made me feel things at all. So this is indeed very good, either way I couldn't. I also like the fact that it's not just a typical smut but it has a story too & emotional things like the fact the she's actually not satisfied with her body.
So in the end this is very well done. You've worked so hard on this melli. Seeing you do so much so ambitiously somehow make me feel proud of you (idek if I'm in a place to say this but it somehow makes me happy to..like.. see you "grow and improve")
Thank you! ❤