datkat124

Hey, I don't mind reading yours if you read mine!! ;)

serval

Hey, I know the­­­­­­­­­­­­se are s­up­er­ a­nn­oy­in­g,­ a­­nd­­ I­­'m­­ not gonna beg
          But I have this story called
          'An Albino On A­­­­­­­­­­­­ Reality­ S­ho­w.­. ­Wh­at­ c­ould go wrong?'
          that I was hopi­­­­­­­­­­­­ng you c­ou­ld­ t­ak­e ­a ­lo­ok­­ a­­t ­­an­­d ­give­­ my ­­some feedback!
          Thanks, I know ­­­­­­­­­­­­these get annoying!
          (: 

datkat124

Hey. You're not a bother at all. I would be honored to read your story. I know what you mean by showing your friends. I'm sorry to hear about your family. But if you ever need a stranger to talk to, I'm there. ;) I'll read your stuff right away. I bet you are AMAZING!! Thanks for your feedback!!

deweyface

Hey, sorry for being a bother, but would you pretty please read my story? I'd like some feedback from people that I don't know, because if I ask people that I DO know, it won't be truthful. Thank you very much! :)
          
          Oh, and I read yours by the way. It was REALLY good. I hate it when families are broken. It made my heart hurt inside, because my family is exactly the same way. You are a great writer and I think you should keep going. I'll look forward to it :D