Hey, sorry for being a bother, but would you pretty please read my story? I'd like some feedback from people that I don't know, because if I ask people that I DO know, it won't be truthful. Thank you very much! :)
Oh, and I read yours by the way. It was REALLY good. I hate it when families are broken. It made my heart hurt inside, because my family is exactly the same way. You are a great writer and I think you should keep going. I'll look forward to it :D