daya360

Just so you guys know I might have errors but please tell me

-moonology-

Hi! One error I noticed is that you start a new paragraph in the middle of a sentence. Finish the sentence, start a new paragraph when the thought changes or someone new starts talking. Also I suggest trying to keep paragraphs 4-8 sentences. I hope this helped, keep writing!  
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daya360

Just so you guys know I might have errors but please tell me

-moonology-

Hi! One error I noticed is that you start a new paragraph in the middle of a sentence. Finish the sentence, start a new paragraph when the thought changes or someone new starts talking. Also I suggest trying to keep paragraphs 4-8 sentences. I hope this helped, keep writing!  
Reply