daydream_err

I just updated the story , the light Festival. Go check it out

daydream_err

Can you guys tell me what you think about the light , if you already did thanks>3 and if you didn't , go do that now

OmgshSomeoneActually

It's good!! Just needs some grammar checking and it'd be great if you could put them into paragraphs and space out the text more whenever someone is talking :D Other than that, it's a good story so far!
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