obsolescencee
Diana…… ❤️
dayeinthetrenches
Kate_Marr
Thank you so much for the follow! ❤️
beabybear
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mαч thíѕ nєw чєαr вє full σf cσlσrѕ,
hαppínєѕѕ & prσѕpєrítч ín чσur lífє.
hєrє’ѕ tσ α ѕpαrklíng nєw чєαr!
∧_∧ ☆､ ,☆ ∧,,∧
(୨୧•ᴗ• ) ∇ ∇ ( ･ᴗ･｡ )
( つ つ ⊥ ⊥ と ⊂ ）
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beabybear
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"+ ⊂ っノﾉ))
*。 ヽ_ヽ_)＼))
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+" Hello!
I’m the happiness fairy.
I’ve sprinkled happy dust on you.
Now smile, dammit.
This shit’s expensive!
Kidding! Just wanted to put a smile on that
beautiful face of yours. Happy weekend! ❤️
dayeinthetrenches
Writing a book is such a pain in the ass, but it's so fun at the same time. Ugh.
ScarlettBlackDaisy
Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3
dayeinthetrenches
@ScarlettBlackDaisy I do have some feedback however. I find that the book's dialogue makes it harder to visualize the characters interacting as it isn't realistic to the point where i can't see myself in this world. It's unrealistic. I also find that the characters in this book try to find "emotion" into the eyes and gestures of one another when in reality, no one can interpret what a person means when looking into someone's eyes. Realistically, us humans are more complex in that aspect and that is why we talk. We have a perception of a person when we communicate. I feel like researching how to interpret that would help your work in the long run. Dialogue is so important for this reason.. it gives us reader’s a window into their internal perceptions. It would help reader’s feel like every emotion that is conveyed matters. I loved your story, Daisy, and I hope I can stick around for your bright future ahead as a writer/author.
dayeinthetrenches
@ScarlettBlackDaisy I haven't read WP in years, but giving it a shot I read the story that felt the most compelling to read. I was surprised because as I began reading I got to feel what it was like when I was a consistent book reader as a teenager. In fact, you made my passion for books reignite again and I am thankful for that. I got to relive having fun reading again. Thank you ❤
beabybear
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. ✿"""""ヽ wєєkєnd rєcípє :
(✿ ﾉﾊﾉﾊﾉﾊ ) ѕєvєrαl ѕpσσnѕ σf ѕunѕhínє
从ﾘ ´ ◡` ) α hαndful σf ѕmílєѕ
/ つ❤️と） αnd α вuckєt full σf
し － J whαt mαkєs чσu hαppч.
┗━━━━°❀•°:✎▤:°•❀°━━━━┛
hαppч wєєkєnd!
beabybear
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∩ ∩ “α líttlє ѕmílє,
い_cノ ／￣＞Ｏ α wσrd σf chєєr,
`c/・ ・っ (ニニニ) 田 α вít σf lσvє
（〇 。) (・ᴗ・`)田田 frσm ѕσmєσnє nєαr,
Ｏ┳Ｏノ)=[￣てノ￣￣￣] α líttlє gíft frσm
◎┻し◎ ◎――――◎=3 σnє hєld dєαr.”
mєrrч chríѕtmαѕ!!!
Butt_Ur_Fly
Hey, sweetheart. You're really strong and capable and just know that we're all here for you. Believe me, things will get better after this, it always does. Just have faith in yourself, hold on and I'm sure you can do this❤
Sending you all my love, warm hugs and positivity❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
obsolescencee
How have you been, lovely?! I hope all is well x
