henlo, might want to check out my jeongcheol fic !! hehe. please do give critics :-)) i’m sure i can handle anything. das ol thaaanks https://my.w.tt/iLt9GSgW3W
Hey I just read your story bothered you write really well but please take it as an advice not as a criticism. I just wanna say it is a good story but try to put scenes and fights and try to longer your chapter and yeah try to express what you are trying to write please take it as an advice hope you don't feel bad I just want to help you thank you