dazzling_star01

I'm gonna be a little slow at posting chapters of Unbroken. I'm thinking of starting a second story. :) 

kendra_strahm

new writer and not very good huh? looks like your book is doing great!

kendra_strahm

@dazzling_star01 hmmm I'll have to check it out. I'm the exact opposite, everyone seems to think mine is good buy I'm unsure... 
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dazzling_star01

@kendra_strahm Thanks! Yeah, I was surprised actually because everyone I know doesn't think I have good writing technique. 
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AnniPea

Mariah. I really like it,  there is  something different about you're writing, and its a good thing, I probably would make a little shorter paragraphs, but everything else is promising. Can't wait, what happend next...  So update soon, so I can get back to reading:D Good Job!

dazzling_star01

@AnniPea Awww, thank you so much. That truly made me smile, I really appreciate your comment. :) And in gonna try and post the next chapter ASAP. 
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dazzling_star01

@MoriahGriggs Well would you look at that. Next you're gonna tell me you're mixed. I don't mind mature content at all lol  And I plan to read all three. If you don't mind lol I just love reading. But I will vote on every chapter of OBTAINERS real quick so you can have more reads. 
          
          Thanks! Can't wait to hear your comments on my book. Please vote.