dcinpa

No, I won't be finishing the story. I wasn't at all happy with the way it ended (basically, not at all). I only finished it because I thought there would be some kind of resolution.  Plus, it seemed to drag on too long. You shouldn't have put these up as two separate stories, as the first can't stand on its own. 
          	
          	Sorry for being brutally honest, but the negatives outweighed my curiosity as to how the total story would end.  
          	
          	-Doug

SueHart2

You have caught my attention by not only reading my stories but by following me as well. I will enjoy hearing some honest opinions from you. I don't hear them on this site. You can do it as you read or send me a message as to how the story is moving. I have it up for that purpose. I wrestle with doubts about some chapters, but they always touch on the plot in some way. I make sure of that. But simple things, like improve this chapter or too much of this____ is what I'm looking for. Thank you.

KBMallion

Hey hun, I appreciate those very lovely votes for All Areas Accessed ♥️

KBMallion

It’s wonderful to have your very lovely votes for Hudson’s Heart.... your support is much appreciated ♥️
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KBMallion

It’s so fabulous to see you now reading and kindly voting for Ignitable.... thank yoooooou ♥️
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SueHart2

We have to be in different time zones. You are zipping through my book, 'En garde, Milady', before I can say thank you. I am writing it fairly quickly. I have only done one edit to this draft. So if you find anything you notice concerning the writing, let me know.  Again, I appreciate your time to read my book. Hope you find it pleasing.