AAAAA; I LOVE YOUR STORY EMPTY! The only thing is I would recommend is keep it off the center thing xdd I'm sorry but it got on my nerves a bit! I hope it doesn't hurt you!
And please continue your story aaaaa--- and the art MMMM ITS SUCH A EYE CANDY. pleASE KEEP CONTINUING!!! YOU ARE AN AWESOME ARTIST AND AUTHOR!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. (Also make sure not to get right into the drama in the beginning of the story, make it into chapter 3 or 2!!)
I hope my advice helped!~~ you're a wonderful person! Have a nice day!!!
