deadkitty1

@LiaFanel Yes it is! I joined because of the book covers. I really like fictionpress because they don't have book covers but now they do. Book covers are my weakness. I'm one of those people that actually do judge a book by its cover and most of the time the stories actually aren't that good as the book cover. XD I think for plagiarism though, you're never really safe. Unfortunately. *sigh*
          
          No I didn't get to upload it all. The formatting is way different and I found myself struggling with it. Haha~ I'll make it up. One day.

@LiaFanel Ooh~ That was fast! Haha! Yeah I have an account here too. Though I don't use it as often as I should... but I do come on every now and then. Any reasons why you moved here?

@JacknJohn You're totally welcome! ^_^

Thanks for fanning me! 

:D

@JacknJohn Yah! Go ahead! Haha!

I'd like to fan you. Is that alright with you? 

@JacknJohn You're totally welcome! It seems like a very nice story. I usually do a good job with critics without hurting the author. I'm not bashing! Just trying to improve. I'll probably keep up since the story interests me. Good luck writing! :D 

Thank you for your critique. I like that you gave an honest opinion, not many do so. I'll make corrections soon. I simply posted the first draft without reviewing it on here. But yes, I agree with all of your suggestions. Hope you're having a good day!

Sorry deadkitty1, I went out of town and didn't get your message. I hope now that you will post!! :)