Tyrrell3
Also how is vlad more powerful than xiang who is 5,000 years old ?
deadpoolmerkwiththem
@Tyrrell3 He has experience. That and Xiang was holding back cause she was drawing out the fight.
deadpoolmerkwiththem
Tyrrell3
Hey I don’t if you still want to try and if your mistyping in your Danny phantom snake sorceress story but I am also done finding the mistakes I could find so if you want to know them I can start off with
Chapter 14 kombat decent
Said xiang was going to her Anodite form instead of her mystique
Announcer called the tarkat ghost bats angels
So that all that needs to be changed in this chapter
Tyrrell3
Chapter 11 public enemies
Xiang saying yeah where there trouble Danny and Dannie phantom are on the job it is supposed to be Danny phantom and mystique is on the job
Tyrrell3
Chapter 12 material instinct
Xiang and Danny say they love Maddie Fenton Danny I can understand but but xiang because she not related to the fentons
Xiang saying their family to vlad when is not related to the fentons in this story
Tyrrell3
Chapter 13 the million dollar ghost
Harriet called xiang aka mystique Dannie phantom
Xiang turns in to Anodite form which is supposed to be her mystique form
Xiang read online that Lady Luck which is supposed to be her mystique form Aka her
Cut of Danny and f/N when it is supposed to be xiang smiling behind jack
KyleDoerr4
hello @deadpoolmerkwiththem i was wondering if you could saw if this story idea can be considered being written by you when you have time to since i'm only curious to know is all as i will be honored if you could write my story idea when you have time to as it involves a female keyblade wielder hero oc who is the main multiversal hero alongside her boyfriend and her friends that she had made while traveling to the different worlds on her journey as they serve as the multiversal allies of the mane 6 & their dragon friend spike https://www.wattpad.com/story/393189961?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=KyleDoerr4
Tyrrell3
Please great and amazing writter deadpoolmerwiththem fix some of the things in your mortalkombat story like sometimes you say the jack is xiang father when he is not and you sometimes called her Jen and levin when she is not please I am begging you fix these typos before doing any other female x Paulina story also you keep calling her a ghost when she is not and her hero name is mystique not the other names you have been using sometimes please for everything that holy fix these typos in this story
Tyrrell3
Ok it going to take a while so am going to read it again so I know what chapters for you to fix
KyleDoerr4
Hello Deadpool i was wondering if a male reader story will be written by you in the future again since i'm only curious to know is all as i will be honored if you could answer my question when you have time to my friend
BeltOrTux
Hey, are you active?
HoumanMV6
Hello . I love you stories
HoumanMV6
@deadpoolmerkwiththem I wanted to say that I had some idea about the child hero. You can write a story about it?!
Doctorwho65
Hello There @deadpoolmerkwiththem
deadpoolmerkwiththem
To everyone that's wondering why I'm not posting as often here is because I'm doing a story on archive of our own and I hardly find the time to work on my stories so sorry to everyone for the long wait. But I will posting here eventually when I can.
DualDragonEmperor
Do u plan on making anything male reader related ?