dearfanjk

Hey there.. Sorry for posting here without permission. I'm a new author, its my first ff. Can you please look at it, and give me feedback, so I can decide whether to continue writing it or stop. It's my first ever story I don't know how good I am.. 
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/388402953?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Winsome24

First time I saw a boy in wattpad 
          Dont take it as a rude comment pls 

I miss her..... i love your writing skills author 

Hi I must say the stories are the best i just randomly read Alpha King's mate on yt and now I'm here just bcoz it attracts me alot there is alot in it and i trust you that you will do your best i love it keep going and lots of love 

Plzz upload next episode of Alpha king Mate 

Hello

❤Brother, you both are literally definition of true love. 
          (❁´◡`❁)may god fill your life with happiness. 

Love your bio ❤