@deathall935
@deathall935 if you're reading this (since I haven't heard from you in a while), I wanted to tell you that I'm making a New Book that'll show Newer Ideas along with the Remake Ideas for your Stories featuring The Coalescence Corporation R.I.M.S. (CC R.I.M.S.) and their Allies.
Happy birthday
Tomorrow it’s my birthday, huh…
Thanks for the follow
Is anyone there? I’m asking for help.
I been running all over the universe some time now, I can’t stop running, they’ve been chasing me all across the galaxy nonstop!
How I can survive this?! I’m not strong! I am struggle in pain and losing insanity, how many I go on!?
However I met an girl, they’ve gain an lovesick! I ran away, I pray for hope an friend or some stranger man could help me. Yet i shouldn’t done that.
They share the same feelings, I BEEN RUNNING ENDLESSLY WITHOUT STOPPING! IS ANYONE THERE—
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Message by protagonist, trembling in pain, can’t find safe home without an lovesick people finding him
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Soon, he been traveling throughout the universe but he can’t find catch a break.
My emotion grows envy so much, I can’t believe they’re are so highly talented and motivated to keep going, me? I don’t.
it’s really hard to be like those writers, which I don’t have, it’s really hard to lower my envy down, yet I don’t have such talent. Jeez it’s hard to maintain my confidence and motivation.
@deathall935 All good. Trust me. I had those feelings too. Not just writing. But I a lot of other day to day life stuff. Art. Fashion. Sports. Everything. All we can do is try to do our best for us first. And then if people enjoy it. That's just a added bonus to our hard work. You'll get to that point where you can say "I'm proud of what I did"
@deathall935 Well it's Natural to feel that way. Not everyone has the same experience with writing. I may not be a good writer. But it took me years to get as good as where I am now. When it comes to ideas and writing the dialog. Meanings behind them. Etc. But I see that some other people have much better creativity than I can ever have. And while that does bring me down a bit because "why didn't I think of that". It does motivate me to keep trying to not only think of something good. But to continue writing While it wasn't envy for me. It was "spite". And that's one hell of a drug when it comes to doing something lol. But after a while. It was no longer out of spite. It was just for me. Such as creating ideas that I genuinely think are good. Stan Lee once said "if you have an idea that you genuinely think is good. Go for it". It may flop in the end. But at least you kept true to yourself The best I can say is to write with what you honestly feel is good. Over time the confidence will go up. And as you write. You'll see what you've done and want to keep going. That will give you motivation
What did you think about Chapter 3 of Poppy Playtime? I thought that it was actually pretty scary and interesting in my opinion.
@deathall935 that's cool. And maybe when you start to make the next Chapters for your "Poppy Playtime: When Alternating Universes Collide" Crossover Story, perhaps you could show what's from Chapter 3 of Poppy Playtime into The Player's Backstory? Like how both Him and his Sister used to be a part of Playtime Co. in the past.
There is no world building in reaction story, should I include that? I enjoy making storytelling within my main canon series.
I don’t know why Union story’s (mostly of same crossover) are getting highly views? Its like a simple gain for view, sure I seen many books given work, but? Why same trope over and over?
Focus on interesting story, not for over and over cliche plot.
@deathall935 Assuming I read it correctly I can see how some of those same tropes can be a bit bland. Especially when it's all you see in other stories I don't want to blame it on the writers. But it could also be that. Usually when someone makes a story. They would just write the first thing that comes to mind. Something that is supposed to get the person's attention right away. But the hard part usually is keeping the attention. I myself am guilty of making the same tropes you'd probably see. They want it to be "edgy" or "cool" or "depressing because pain makes you stornger" or something like that. To which I kinda did as well. But I learned how to write a bit differently. It could also due with the person's lack of story writing. As well as age. Usually the younger one is. You can tell how cliché the story is. Even if they're older. Maybe it's their first story and they just write what first comes to mind. And that just so happens to be the tropes you stated It's possibly for those tropes to be "good" if you write accordingly for it. Like give a reason to why it's like that. But it could just be a multitude of reason (Again. I am hoping I read what you wrote correctly. It was a bit hard to follow to understand it. I don't know if "Union" is a trope. Or a Story. If it's a story then I'm assuming those were the tropes you saw)
@yankee1147 well…most of the time of neglect and abuse Union story are often told, yet it follows same pattern. MC gets beaten by Union students. MC gets kick from school. MC gains powerful from someone he wished to be powerful, destroy/kill the union students, all those tropes is repeating. Little, but still follow the plot. Nothing isn’t interesting, nor it’s interesting plot for world building.
Happy new years lad.