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@deathsharbringer27 thanks

I like the picture dude! 

So I read it and it was better than the first one. However, the dialogue is still not spaced.

@AlbusAkemi0. Can you read this new chapter

That’s cool

Albus: Like this
            
            Albus 2: Oh really?
            
            Albus 3: Yup (snaps his fingers)

Also that’s not what I meant. What I mean is that separate that paragraph into their own lines. 

@deathsharbringer27. Yes