deathsharbringer27

Hope you enjoy
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/230596376

deathsharbringer27

Um my first time actually trying to make a book
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/230596376

deathsharbringer27

@deathsharbringer27 thanks
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AlbusAkemi0

I like the picture dude!
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AlbusAkemi0

Thanks for following! I hope you enjoy my story!

AlbusAkemi0

So I read it and it was better than the first one. However, the dialogue is still not spaced.
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deathsharbringer27

@AlbusAkemi0. Can you read this new chapter
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AlbusAkemi0

That’s cool
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deathsharbringer27

I wanna learn how to make a good story I never wrote a book before.

AlbusAkemi0

Albus: Like this
            
            Albus 2: Oh really?
            
            Albus 3: Yup (snaps his fingers)
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AlbusAkemi0

Also that’s not what I meant. What I mean is that separate that paragraph into their own lines.
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deathsharbringer27

@deathsharbringer27. Yes
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