deboss _lobo

for those who are wondering am i still working on my story The Birth of a Saiyan Dynasty the answer is yes  Chapter 2 is just now getting updated now that my problem with wattpad has been fixed so expect the whole chapter by the 25th of this month

so i just started my first story and i want feedback on how it is and what can i improve on here it is:https://www.wattpad.com/story/252094158-the-birth-of-a-saiyan-dynasty

Quick question,  should i start a book,and if so what should it be about?

Thank you for the follow and have a marvelous day.

Bruha

Thanks for the follow!