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I posted Chapters 31 and 32, plus an epilogue. That means: THE FIRST DRAFT IS COMPLETE!! 110,850 words!  Woohoo! I had a lot of fun. I will be adding edits from comments over the next month.

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Okay, Really big story adjustment, apologies to those in the middle of the story but I really needed to go back and introduce Carter Holland right off, he has become too important to the story and I think the new chapter one does a better job setting expectations. 
          
          
          So close to finished! Thanks to @debarbique for all of the amazing feedback !

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Chapter 21 is finally posted after much struggle between the characters and the author. I'm not entirely sure why this chapter was so difficult to write and edit. 
          
          Now that it's behind me and I've already written 1/3 of the next chapter I think perhaps I was pushing the story in the wrong direction. I had to listen to the characters, which I did but then had to figure out what I was going to do with the change in plot.  
          
          Still having fun though, more soon.