Chapter 21 is finally posted after much struggle between the characters and the author. I'm not entirely sure why this chapter was so difficult to write and edit.
Now that it's behind me and I've already written 1/3 of the next chapter I think perhaps I was pushing the story in the wrong direction. I had to listen to the characters, which I did but then had to figure out what I was going to do with the change in plot.
Still having fun though, more soon.