@chandreyisen okay, here's the truth: even despite re-writing the book, i have no idea where i'm going with it. i've wrote and re-wrote the third chapter over and over again, and it's bothering me so much. i just can't seem to connect with the characters anymore, the plot feels messy, and my writing seems dull and awkward. there's also the fact that i was out of town for the winter break, there's an overload of homework, and i have exams this month. i'm probably just going to start writing a new book until i find myself longing for Target again, or if it comes to it, deleting it. thanks for your support, though! :)