ded_river

If you haven't watched Loki yet and plan to, stop reading. Spoilers ahead.
          	
          	He was ready to face his worst fear—being alone for the rest of his life—before he'd even think about killing Sylvie.
          	
          	Also, what do you mean he could've just let the timelines die, but because she couldn't accept that... he went, "I know what kind of god I need to be," and casually walked into temporal radiation like, "Yep. Let's see what you've got," as if he hadn't already watched Victor Timely get turned into spaghetti approximately a thousand times. 
          	
          	AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN HE SPENT CENTURIES LEARNING PHYSICS JUST SO HE COULD SAVE THEM???
          	
          	That's some glorious purpose, my man.
          	
          	Tom Hiddleston did NOT have to act that hard.
          	
          	Sir, we would've believed you with 60% less emotional damage.
          	
          	New standards unlocked.
          	
          	High-key obsessed with Loki right now. 
          	
          	You know what, sir...
          	
          	If I were you, I'd probably fall for myself too.
          	
          	Understandable. ✌❤️
          	
          	Have a wonderful time holding the multiverse together.
          	
          	I'll miss you.

ded_river

If you haven't watched Loki yet and plan to, stop reading. Spoilers ahead.
          
          He was ready to face his worst fear—being alone for the rest of his life—before he'd even think about killing Sylvie.
          
          Also, what do you mean he could've just let the timelines die, but because she couldn't accept that... he went, "I know what kind of god I need to be," and casually walked into temporal radiation like, "Yep. Let's see what you've got," as if he hadn't already watched Victor Timely get turned into spaghetti approximately a thousand times. 
          
          AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN HE SPENT CENTURIES LEARNING PHYSICS JUST SO HE COULD SAVE THEM???
          
          That's some glorious purpose, my man.
          
          Tom Hiddleston did NOT have to act that hard.
          
          Sir, we would've believed you with 60% less emotional damage.
          
          New standards unlocked.
          
          High-key obsessed with Loki right now. 
          
          You know what, sir...
          
          If I were you, I'd probably fall for myself too.
          
          Understandable. ✌❤️
          
          Have a wonderful time holding the multiverse together.
          
          I'll miss you.

ded_river

Dating is scary because what do you mean there's a very real possibility my future husband won't dramatically flip his hair like Tom Hiddleston's Loki, look mildly offended, and say, "I beg your pardon." 
          
          I'm sorry, but if I were ever in the same room as that man, I'd simply cease to function.
          
          God, he is UNBELIEVABLE.
          
          The Miss Minutes in me took one look at Loki and immediately went,
          
          "Yep. Him. My He Who Remains."
          
          AND WHY DOES HE HAVE ABS???
          
          THAT'S JUST CRUEL AND UNFAIR.

Moonlitmuse18

I loved your book so far and wanted to ask u a favour! Can I?

Moonlitmuse18

no what i meant to say is is the sory good
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ded_river

@Moonlitmuse18 
            
            Mon cœur,
            
            As for whether you should continue writing Malfoy?—don't EVER stop writing because you're worried it isn't good enough. Every writer starts somewhere, and practice is how we improve.
            
            If you're having fun with the story, keep going. Write for yourself first. The best thing you can do right now is keep writing, keep experimenting, and keep learning as you go.
            
            It's your world that you've created. You decide what you do with it. No one else has the right to make that choice for you.
            
            Good luck!!!! ✨
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Moonlitmuse18

so bassically i am writing a book for the very first time on my profile named Malfoy? and I need a help to u know read and tell me if it's good and should i continue or not
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