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welp according to wattpad i have no messages so apologies for not responding to anyone atm!

ChaosHimself

Dear Emilia
          
               I am not here to rip your teeth through your ass about one of your fanfics, the demigods games. I got commenters for that if you haven't noticed. Although your book is set on a brilliant foundation, it lacks certain details and other, should I say, plot points that was missed out. I know I know. It os a fanfic. But you do so good in some area and so bad in others, Ibjust couldn't help myself. If you really wanted to do a demigod hunger game crossover, a better approach would be after you read the series instead of screwing over Riordans schedule.
          
                Now don't get me wrong. I enjoyed this book far more than most other fanfics out there and I will definitely rank as one of the top three I have ever come across. And the way you introduced character swas golden. And in fact, the whole thing would have worked out better if you didn't put the main characters in and just made all new ones (do not steal this idea please). I wished you finished it because although it was on a busted track the train was going the right way.
          
          Sincerely, Booksinner
          
          PS you can read one of my fanfics, you shoukd be able to find it by searching booksinner. Give feedback like I did you and we can have a mutual relation ship. And also, read all of your comments.