arabarria

Please read my story : A wolf's life.
          Its about a simple girl who turned into a werewolf. Students are suddenly dying and they do not know who is killing them and why. there's no suspense in the start but it gets better.  i'm not saying its good. You judge it. Please tell me what should i change or add. =) it would really help if you do. Thanks! =))
          
          
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          I have a new story! =)
          its about a girl who is left alone in a big house. her parents are out for a week and she's seeing things. Scary things. her world turned upside down when she received a phone call from chapter one.
          
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          -Thunder cat-Ara <3