thalia105

hello! would you mind checking out my story?Maybe comment, vote?? that would be awesome! i like yours btw, although i think you you couldve made the interegation scene a  bit longer! it was a wuick and nice reaf tho!

thalia105

oh ok.. the vicabulary was actually really impressing for that you were only in grade 6!
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deileenx

@thalia105  thx and of course ill check out your story. by the way the reason i didn't make the interrogation scene longer is because i wanted to keep the story the exact same way as i wrote it in grade 6.
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