Deku

@fragilecreashuns Hi there! Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner. I'd be happy to do a critique of your story, although I can't do it immediately. I'll probably get to it within the next few days. c: Is there any particular format you'd like? I could comment on the chapters or simply PM the whole thing to you.

hey. You seem like a good critique:) so far my friends liked my story, and gave me positive comments, but i'd definitely like to have more feedback. It would be really appreciated :))
          my story is "Dissolve in the sky?"
          

And yes, I have been looking through the writings and there's SO MUCH FANFICTION. And not good stuff, either; good fanfiction is fine, but this stuff is deplorable. 

In the comments section is great. Right now, I only have two works up: two free writes entitled "Free Write I [Rain]" and "Free Write II [Bull-Fighting]". I would love critiques on either one, or both, whatever you'd prefer. I also don't mind if they're in the comments; I'm not ashamed of people pointing out my mistakes. :D 

You are the coolest - please excuse my mass creeping. I love your username, and after seeing your wonderfully in-depth review of "Revenge is Sweet" (which I also critiqued) I was wondering if you could do the same for any of my stuff? I am in desperate need of a good, thorough critique-er. 
          If you have too much on your plate I totally understand, but I just wanted to throw that by you! 

@Liger0Schneider Right back atcha'! There aren't enough LoZ fans and cosplayers in this world of ours. c:

Thanks for fanning =) 
          Its a lot of fun talking about Cosplaying and Legend of Zelda with you! =D

@CauseofChaos Thanks so much! ^^

Thanks for adding Fall from Grace to your library :) ( I dropped the bit off the beginning to shorten it)