Hey everyone I'm currently re-writing chapter one of Halo Hills, no I'm not editing it theres a difference. So the reason why I'm editing it is because i thought it was bad which in my point of veiw it could use alot of work. I also relize that I am a little late in finishing the chapter. I have had a very busy last couple of weeks and this week it wont be any better so I'm gonna try my hardest to finish it this week, next week, or this weekend. The latest will be 2 weeks (hopefully)