@TrixR_4Kids Ahhh. I see. Well it's kind of better~ Just don't forget to also introduce the other characters so that readers won't get confused. It wouldn't hurt to add a few more words to describe them, like how they look, how they act, etc...
@TrixR_4Kids Ohh yeah I saw him! ^^ but unfortunately he's not my ideal Goldilocks huhu. I also kind of changed the cast, too. So yeah. I updated today! So you can check it out ^^ apparently it was supposed to be dedicated to you, but my phone just wont work with me rn. I hope you have fun reading the new chapter!! ♡
@TaehyungSyndrome Filipina :) Hahaha. I think Taehyung had abs before, like in We Are Bulletproof era. Idk. Maybe he lost it somewhere in the Milky Way. XD