TrixR_4Kids
there is always a chapter two
demiliciously
TrixR_4Kids
oh and each chapter I think I'm going to switch between Delilah and jace
demiliciously
@TrixR_4Kids Ahhh. I see. Well it's kind of better~ Just don't forget to also introduce the other characters so that readers won't get confused. It wouldn't hurt to add a few more words to describe them, like how they look, how they act, etc...
TrixR_4Kids
here try reading it again I fixed it
TrixR_4Kids
he's intimidating
TrixR_4Kids
well Tully's real name is tai irl and he's 6 foot and currently despises me xD
demiliciously
@TrixR_4Kids Oh, I see. You should include those in the chapter then ;) like, give the main character a perspective about the other.
TrixR_4Kids
so so what'd you think
TrixR_4Kids
So I'm writing a Romance and I'm writing from the maincharacter point of veiw who is a girl. You should read the first chapter Please Kthnx
TrixR_4Kids
just search him up, he's from zoey 101 and carried diaries
demiliciously
@TrixR_4Kids Ohh yeah I saw him! ^^ but unfortunately he's not my ideal Goldilocks huhu. I also kind of changed the cast, too. So yeah. I updated today! So you can check it out ^^ apparently it was supposed to be dedicated to you, but my phone just wont work with me rn. I hope you have fun reading the new chapter!! ♡
TrixR_4Kids
also I honestly thought Goldie was Austin Butler until I saw the cast
demiliciously
@TrixR_4Kids I feel so stupid not knowing who Austin Butler is, but I think I do know him... wth. hahaha!
TrixR_4Kids
Your book 'Don't Be Friends With A Beggar' is awesome
TrixR_4Kids
@demiliciously I think I mixed up the titled when in like the first paragraph you were talking about like to don't ever be friends with a beggar xD
demiliciously
@TrixR_4Kids omg thank you so much! although it's title is really "I'm Friends with a Beggar" but omg thanks!