demonicdragon09

Eating watermelon at 12:21pm 
          	What am i doing with my life? XD

demonicdragon09

@Octoberflower24 well yeah ... Remember our seasons are opposite too
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Autumnlily36

@demonicdragon09 WAIT. Y'ALL HAVE WATERMELONS RIGHT NOW?! ;-; I have to wait till at least May. ;-; 
          	  <\3 my heart... TT_TT 
          	  Get some and eat it for me, lol..
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SuperSuperrr

Give my own story a read! It's heavily influenced by anime!

demonicdragon09

So far I've read the first couple of chapters i really like your writing style and the plot is exciting. I think you need to think about the grammar and the wording of some of your phrases a bit more. Also i still dont understand why their abilities are "sins". Other than that great work so far  @SuperSuperrr
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demonicdragon09

Eating watermelon at 12:21pm 
          What am i doing with my life? XD

demonicdragon09

@Octoberflower24 well yeah ... Remember our seasons are opposite too
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Autumnlily36

@demonicdragon09 WAIT. Y'ALL HAVE WATERMELONS RIGHT NOW?! ;-; I have to wait till at least May. ;-; 
            <\3 my heart... TT_TT 
            Get some and eat it for me, lol..
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