@denisucuuu thank you so much for the feedback! i totally understand what you mean about despair avenue being more forgivable for its flaws. i recently reread the trilogy in prep for the rewrite and i had many of the same criticisms, so thank you for affirming that! in my opinion, the final one is leagues above in quality compared to even take two, so hopefully that resonates a little better with you! in terms of the rewrite, despair avenue will be receiving an almost complete revamping (same characters and setting, similar death order, completely new actual writing) whereas take two and the final one will be receiving smaller adjustments to bring them up to standard. (although take two has so far required a much more substantial overhaul than i required, generally the bulk of the revamp is closer to editing what’s already there than rewriting it). let me know what you think of the third book! i genuinely think it’s some of my best work (although it isn’t without its flaws, of course!) and i can’t wait to hear what you think!
