derivevelocity

One day I will finish the aot story. One day.

derivevelocity

Okay, I changed my mind I'm back. Expect the book to be updated with some information. Now that I'm older and more experienced, I'm going to be reforming the chapters I did to make them less cheesy (I guess) and make the writing overall better (for example having the Warhammer Titan just magically be in the hands of Marley, I don't know what I was thinking). As Isayama has demonstrated, the writing of AoT is very intricate and I would like to replicate that skill. If you're too lazy to reread all the chapters when I make the changes, I'll leave a summary when I post the next chapter. On a side note, I feel terrible looking at previous announcements promising a new chapter soon and would like to apologize to anyone who may still be interested in following the story.

derivevelocity

The current plan is to have the reforms done before my Spring Break and upload the next chapter(s) during it.
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derivevelocity

Just a small update, progress on the chapter has been great.

derivevelocity

@CaptainRex4 Yup agreed. I'm making sure this chapter is a lot better than the previous ones.
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CaptainRex4

@BobMan6006 Take your time, but not too long friend.
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derivevelocity

Expect a chapter very soon, and I mean it.

derivevelocity

@lordnocturne Glad to hear man, thanks.
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lordnocturne

@BobMan6006 hearing that you somehow improved your writing makes me way more hyped for the story! Honestly even with the four chapters up you all already made a amazing story tho I’m anxious to see how the whole story is going to play through your vision.
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derivevelocity

@warhammers Yes, it did. While that won't really impact me until later on, it's still good to plan ahead.
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Krishjaiswal8047

Hey?

derivevelocity

@Krishjaiswal8047 Chapter almost complete
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Krishjaiswal8047

@BobMan6006 what about the story?
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