dessy_boobear

Okay so… I’ve been lowkey thinking about unpublishing (not deleting!!) Bittersweet and rewriting it. Mostly because I hate how detailed I made the beginning — it felt right at the time, but now I feel stuck trying to keep up that same level of detail, even when I’ve had writer’s block or was rushing just to get a chapter out. It’s draining and makes writing way less fun.
          	
          	I’ve also been rethinking some of the solos. Like, I use a lot of routines from dancers like Lilly Anderson, Tatum Self, Ellary Day Szyndlar(?), and Harper Anderson — and let’s be real, they’re insanely talented. So when Virella is dancing at that level, it doesn’t make sense for her to be barely beating Maddie or Chloe. No shade at all, but based on the routines I chose, Virella honestly should’ve been 10,000 points ahead of them. It’s been bugging me more and more.
          	
          	That said — I won’t do anything if you’re really against it! I just wanted to be honest, and also let you know that if I do rewrite, updates would probably be slower.
          	
          	BUT, here’s what I’m thinking:
          		1.	I can finish Season 2 and Season 3 as they are now, and then go back and rewrite the earlier chapters after.
          	
          	OR
          		2.	I can unpublish the whole thing now and rewrite from the start, which would give me more freedom and help me actually get more chapters done — since I wouldn’t feel pressured to update while forcing myself to follow the current style.
          	
          	Personally, I’m leaning toward option 2 because I know I’d enjoy writing it more that way. But I want to hear your thoughts first before I make any moves.

dessy_boobear

@Myah710 thats what i thought, i just wanted to know what everyone else wanted. but i’ll probably do 2 anyways. (i lowk don’t know why option 1 was a thing)
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Myah710

I say 2 if it makes writing more enjoyable then do it that way because there’s no point doing something if u don’t enjoy it 
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dessy_boobear

Okay so… I’ve been lowkey thinking about unpublishing (not deleting!!) Bittersweet and rewriting it. Mostly because I hate how detailed I made the beginning — it felt right at the time, but now I feel stuck trying to keep up that same level of detail, even when I’ve had writer’s block or was rushing just to get a chapter out. It’s draining and makes writing way less fun.
          
          I’ve also been rethinking some of the solos. Like, I use a lot of routines from dancers like Lilly Anderson, Tatum Self, Ellary Day Szyndlar(?), and Harper Anderson — and let’s be real, they’re insanely talented. So when Virella is dancing at that level, it doesn’t make sense for her to be barely beating Maddie or Chloe. No shade at all, but based on the routines I chose, Virella honestly should’ve been 10,000 points ahead of them. It’s been bugging me more and more.
          
          That said — I won’t do anything if you’re really against it! I just wanted to be honest, and also let you know that if I do rewrite, updates would probably be slower.
          
          BUT, here’s what I’m thinking:
          	1.	I can finish Season 2 and Season 3 as they are now, and then go back and rewrite the earlier chapters after.
          
          OR
          	2.	I can unpublish the whole thing now and rewrite from the start, which would give me more freedom and help me actually get more chapters done — since I wouldn’t feel pressured to update while forcing myself to follow the current style.
          
          Personally, I’m leaning toward option 2 because I know I’d enjoy writing it more that way. But I want to hear your thoughts first before I make any moves.

dessy_boobear

@Myah710 thats what i thought, i just wanted to know what everyone else wanted. but i’ll probably do 2 anyways. (i lowk don’t know why option 1 was a thing)
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Myah710

I say 2 if it makes writing more enjoyable then do it that way because there’s no point doing something if u don’t enjoy it 
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JTPruett14

Hello ans apologizes for coming onto your message board unanounced, i am a author that has begun writing for my first Harry potter fanfic and i saw your comment on a Harry potter fanfic so, to one potterhead reader to another could you please check my Harry potter book out.

dessy_boobear

@JTPruett14 i really like the plot and your writing is so good 
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urfavwheeler720

Hello! I was just wondering if you would like to read my newest book. It is a Stranger Things book and I would be so grateful if you read it! Thank you
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395412120-midnight-skies-stranger-things-1-5

dessy_boobear

I’ll check it out! I live for a good Stranger Things book
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dessy_boobear

guys i need to start writing bc i have so many ideas for s3, BUT I CANT DO S3 WITHOUT FINISHING TWO 
          
          anyways probably gonna start writing again soon (ive been gone for like three years guys)

Enhypenvrss

 @dessy_boobear I'm just trying to speed run it and like build up the thing I'm trying to do for season 2/3 in season 1
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Enhypenvrss

@dessy_boobear literally me rn I'm still on s1 and I already have plans for s3 and s4 and I'm so upset I can't just skip
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dessy_boobear

HII! Hello everyone!
          
          I just realized I haven’t updated since the 15th, and I have zero excuse. The motivation just hasn’t been there. Every time I sit down to write, I somehow end up getting bored or distracted, and then—before I know it—I’m off writing another book that I’ll never even publish. It’s a never-ending cycle at this point.
          
          So, with that being said, I’ve decided to take a short break. I don’t know exactly how long it’ll be, but hopefully, it won’t be too long! I just need some time to reset and get my motivation back.
          
          Thank you all for understanding, and I appreciate every single one of you! Love y’all, and I’ll be back soon!

Myah710

Of course we all need a break sometimes take as long as u need
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