Hi busy reading your story Howling at The Stars. Really enjoying it so far but unable to vote after each chapter as you have uploaded the whole story in one lot. Was there a reason you did this?
Hi thank you for voting for The Colour of Love. If you have any constructive feedback for me, that would be gratefully received as I am in the process of editing and rewriting this story.
Thanks for your feedback.
My Beta Reader has found many problem areas such as time line and I should 'show not tell' as so many editors point out. But I will let you see the first couple edited chapters when I am done so you can see the difference. I am on my 2nd round of editing and still a long way to go.