okay im going to give you my honest opinion. i just read the prologue and i thought i was good but, you should have used a little less detail on what you already put into detail. like about his lips. i know you didnt ask for my opinion but i will love to tell you that it was pretty good and i will try to read all the chapters. i am hooked. lol. thanks for recommending me the book i will surly try to read it.