Airativra

Hi devanshi16lal...tqs so vm 4 adding SD to ur Reading List...
          
          I voted on ur story for admirably u hve taken a very tough subject as ur base..ur knowledge on the players of the great epic Mahabharata is extensive..
          
          I was once gvn the actual txt of the Mahabharata which is indeed very intense, a tough read, a single sentence speaking volumes and holding deep meaning...it in essence expounding the complexities of the being known as human..
          
          I can note frm ur writing that u r a very young person, most likely a teenager...
          
          U hve a delightful plot...which would hve been a more absorbing read with better techniques of expression..demarcation of the dialogues would make it an easier read..
          
          Best wishes 2 u in ur studies and future... :) ....

Airativra

@devanshi16lal 
            
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devanshi16lal

@Airativra oh nice, yeah it's awful that they are being used for TRP but I think due to them fans are getting excited and some are even thinking there is something going on between them...... But I think they are now only focusing on their career
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Airativra

@devanshi16lal 
            
            Hah...!
            
            ..I wrote it out of annoyance actually..
            
            ... :D ...
            
            ..to dispel the general consensus...
            
            ..of them being anything but 2 accomplished artistes wanting to prove their worth..
            
            It's appalling how the duo r still being used for gain...
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