Jay

Can you imagine not wanting someone to be rude to you but sitting there and telling the chat about writing to not be "rudely opinionated" 
          
          I know it was toward me because I'm the only one who ever tells this person anything but "great job..it's wonderful"
          
          I try and give constructive criticism in the chat. 
          
          I question things to make people think about what they're writing and go further in the building of character/world etc
          
          I'm sorry but if you say you are giving Steve a kid in 1921. I'm gonna let you know that Steve would have been like 6. I don't want you to put that mistake out on the internet. Especially if you are putting Bucky with that said kid.
          
          I look at things and analyze them. 
          
          It was pretty much insinuated I was bullying this person.
          
          It's really made me not even want to write recently.
          

Put up my story "Feeling Numb" . I hope you enjoy it.

I know I said I was going to update things this weekend, but I'm not really feeling it.
          
          Maybe during the week or later

I'm going to be putting up more of my Batfam stories throughout the weekend. Hope to hear how y'all feel about them.

So with the way work is going right now, I'm probably not going to be doing the whumptober challenge this year. Maybe next time.

I just set up for Whumptober! I plan on writing the Batfam all month! Super excited. This is the first time I will be doing this challenge.
          
          I'm going to try and do some for my Marvel Oc's as well 
          
          I've just been really motivated recently.

Next up is Izzy Allerdyce. He is Desiree's best friend. I didn't go too deep into his abilities.
          
          Name: Isaac “Izzy” Allerdyce
          Age: 20
          Birthday: April 16
          Astrology: Aries
          Pronouns: He/Him
          Sexuality: Pansexual
          Parents: St. John Allerdyce(Father), Nicola Anderson(Mother, deceased)
          Siblings: Kane Allerdyce, Hayden Allerdyce
          Powers:  Fire creation/manipulator
          

So I would like to introduce some of the characters I will be using. I will start with Desiree since I posted her story.
          
          Name: Desiree LeBeau
          
          Age: 18
          
          Birthday: November 20th
          
          Astrology: Scorpio/Sag cusp
          
          Pronouns: She/Her
          
          Sexuality: Heterosexual
          
          Parents: Remy LeBeau(Father), Anna Marie Darkholme(Mother)
          
          Siblings: Luc LeBeau(older brother)
          
          Powers: Kinetic energy manipulation: can transfer kinetic energy from one object to another, thus strengthening their attacks, or tearing holes in walls with a simple touch, turn an object's potential energy into kinetic energy, making it explosive, or cause a target to be unable to move or unable to stop if in motion.
          
          Empathy: can fully interpret the emotions, moods, and temperaments of others without reading apparent symptoms, allowing them to understand introverts or discover one emotion is actually hiding another. They can attack someone in a personal and emotional way since they know exactly what emotion is flowing through themselves and can use this knowledge to play against them. Some users may learn to read emotional imprints left into environment or objects.
          
          Usually over time, an Empath's power grows to the point that they can manipulate emotions in others, and possibly use them to empower themselves. The user may learn to extend their power over/on vast numbers of sentient beings or reach extreme distances, even other levels of existence but this may be possible only if the user has an emotional link to those the search is already in effect on.
                 -empathy absorption: she can absorb the emotion from others through touch

If you recommend a story to me, if there are any of the following trigger warnings make sure to let me know.
          
          Suicide(thoughts, attempts, successes)
          Car crash(mostly involving a death)
          Parent death
          
          
          I can handle them if I know they are there.
          
          Thank you!
          
          
          

I put up another Story! Let me know what y'all think.