traapunzelxx

Thanks For the Follow , Like & Read My New Update & Tell Me Whatchu Think

devonnabenjamin

@traapunzelxx ummm I like your book,but to be honest your moving very fast in your book and if u going move fast a least have it make since, like u should had introduce the characters one at a time and  tell us about them cause I didn't know he had a girlfriend,and I don't understand how they're dating that fast,and I didn't know here dad was in her life 
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