As promised, the update has arrived!
While I haven't changed the broad arc of the story, I have added flavor and edited out mistakes and discrepancies. Even if you've already read the story, I would suggest taking a peek at the new and improved chapters!
From here, I plan to add edits to most chapters at a rate of several per week, so re-starting and re-reading the whole story the moment won't reveal much for new content. However, as time moves on, so will the edits.
As always, thank all of you for reading, and feel free to leave comments as feedback is always appreciated. :) Cheers!